ARISTON

THE BRIEF

Ariston Thermo is a global heating company. They'd translated their Italian website into English, but it wasn't quite right.

I was asked to look at certain pages and, where necessary, edit or rewrite sections so that they read correctly.

THE OUTCOME

This was a tricky but fun project that really got me into the proofreading zone. I proofed the site for a number of days and crafted separate documents for the business to work from. This meant every single error on a specific page was captured on its own document.

I was requested to proof certain pages, not the whole site as some sections are run by a separate part of the Ariston business.

At time of writing the website is still undergoing the changes, but here are some snippets of my work: